Homebody Wander Sparkle (age 8) Glitter (age 6)

Monday, April 5, 2010

another poem

Here's another one of Sparkle's poems. I coached Sparkle very heavily through this one. A side benefit of working on these poems with her is that she is starting to understand the concept of revising and that some word choices are better than others.

This poem is based on an activity from our language arts program. The "eep" words came from a list, but Sparkle chose all the words, word placement, and line breaks herself. I helped with some spelling.

** The Chick **

Peep, peep, I'm not asleep
Because you like to keep
Me in a jeep.

The jeep's beep is so very interesting
I do not feel like resting.
****

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